Pierre this is not a paper. I am writing the equivalent of a newspaper article. The audience is non-experts.

Your remarks are useless to me. If you want readers to have access to a more accurate article then you got to point out the flaws. Otherwise I have no way to evaluate your criticism. You could be wrong but nobody reading this comment of your will be able to tell.

I don’t see how you add to the discussion. You are not helping me or other readers. Try to be helpful rather than smug.